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Elijah Westin's avatar

Beautiful

Something very humanizing about the cold.

I love it, except when I have to work in it (I work outside)

But sometimes even then its a vibe

Id much prefer the extreme cold (-20 and below) over the extreme hot (for me +30 and above)

Aaliya's avatar

Wow, this poem beautifully captures the raw and invigorating experience of stepping into the cold. The vivid imagery and emotional depth make you feel every sensation as if you’re there. It’s a powerful reminder of how the cold can awaken our senses and make us feel truly alive.

Hannah Torkelson's avatar

I so respect this. Just wrote a love letter from winter. You sure have a way with your poems. 💙

Lioaurelia's avatar

Beautiful writing❤️

Kim Williams, M.Div.'s avatar

Between the pulse of the meter and the hush of metaphor, a wintered chill rises and steals the breath from the soul.